Copy Critique


Are you working hard to project a strong business image, only to find your message drowned out in the crowd?

If you are serious about attracting more clients and growing your business QUICKLY…

Here’s How a 30-Minute Phone Call Will
Save You Thousands of Dollars and Time, and Bring
You the Clients and Income You Desire

Congratulations on taking the right step toward growing the business you desire. Most businesses struggle with their website copy.

Struggle no more when you sign up for an in-depth web copy critique and a one-on-one 30-minute phone consultation to discuss your web copy.

Your website is the easiest and fastest way to advertise your services or product. But there’s a catch: you have 3 to 5 seconds to grab a prospective client’s attention.

One. Two. Three. And they are gone.

And with millions of websites to choose from, the competition is fierce. Want to stay ahead of the crowd, connect with your target audience, rank high on search engines, and reach millions of prospective customers?

You must have compelling web copy. Copy that creates desire and inspires potential customers to search your site. More importantly, your web copy must drive potential customers to take action.

“Before hiring Sumèr to write Hills of Africa Travel’s web copy and help us with our SEO efforts, our website was more of a brochure and not doing what it should to attract customers and increase sales. Now, our website is not only optimized for SEO purposes, but our web copy is exciting and encourages visitors to browse the site and to contact us. Hiring Sumèr to write our web copy has been the best investment we’ve made in our business. We’ve seen a huge increase in customer attraction and even better leads from the website.”

Sandy Salle, co-owner, Hills of Africa Travel

During this Web Copy Critique Strategy Session, we’ll uncover exactly what message your target wants to hear and ways to convey the right message so you can quickly attract the clients you want. You get direct access to my professional web copy knowledge so you can avoid the same costly mistakes most entrepreneurs make.

In your 30-minute session, you’ll get . . .

  • Thoroughly critiqued web copy from your website with suggestions you can implement immediately.
  • A clear understanding of the message you need to convey to attract your target market.
  • One-on-one attention to discuss specific marketing-copy challenges.
  • Crystal clear on who you are and what you offer.

**I will critique up to 5 web pages or a basic 5-page website.

“I really felt as though you were a partner in the process and not solely a copywriter. I was impressed with the way you wanted to learn about me and my business – my background, where I was coming from, what my goals were, and who my target market was. Since you understood my business, my goals, and my target market, you were able to offer great insight throughout the process. You definitely helped clarify my message. It was extremely impressive that you could take pages of my ideas and simplify them into short, concise copy. And by doing this, you didn’t lose the message . . . you actually made it easier to understand.”

Jonathan Kauffman, president, Nest Realty

Special Offer for Webinar Attendees

For only $49—a fraction of what it costs to hire me—you have the opportunity to have your web copy marketing message critiqued by me. You will walk away from the session with website copy that is ready to be implemented and a more focused marketing message.

As a thank-you gift, you’ll receive a 10% discount on web copywriting if you decide to hire Sumèr to write your web copy. This offer is good until June 27, 2010.

Take advantage of this $49 Web Copy Critique Strategy Session today!
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